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07 October 2011 @ 02:40 pm
Gone, and a cloud in my heart  
Title: Gone, and a cloud in my heart
Fandom: Hawaii Five-0
Pairing: Steve/Danny
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 133
Comment: written for The H50 Beatlemania prompt-fest. 2nd person POV

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Danny's eyes slam shut as your hand slides over his cock and you can't help kissing him. His lips are as irresistible as the rest of his body and you taste and taste as much as you can.

You need to savour this and imprint it on your memory because you know he's not here for good. He'll leave if Gracie needs him and you would never stop him. Never.

Danny's commitment to Grace, to his family, is one of the many things you love about him. You can't deny it hits all your buttons and it's why you won't beg him to stay when the time comes.

So you carefully lock away every memory of him and keep kissing and kissing, tasting and inhaling against the time your life is empty again.

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~Camille-Miko~camille_miko on October 7th, 2011 08:08 am (UTC)
OMG ! So right and so painful... Poor Steve TT__TT
bookaddict43: steve mcgarrettbookaddict43 on October 7th, 2011 11:48 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
JazzyBabejazzybabe56 on October 7th, 2011 04:25 pm (UTC)
oh.....wow ;___;

bookaddict43: steve mcgarrettbookaddict43 on October 7th, 2011 11:49 pm (UTC)
Glad you like it! :)
Magicgerbilmagicgerbil on October 7th, 2011 05:52 pm (UTC)
Ohhh....that's beautiful. Sad and perfect.
bookaddict43: steve mcgarrettbookaddict43 on October 7th, 2011 11:49 pm (UTC)
Thank you! :)
Donna Shannon Mariegem1n12505 on October 7th, 2011 07:22 pm (UTC)
<3 breaking but so true
bookaddict43: steve mcgarrettbookaddict43 on October 7th, 2011 11:50 pm (UTC)
I could see Steve doing this *hugs him*
n0m_de_plum on October 8th, 2011 09:14 pm (UTC)
You know I'm writing a fic basically about this same thing, and it really bothers me. Danny's comment in the season 1 finale that he doesn't have a life in Hawaii, while blatantly not true, is half-right in the sense that, based on the way the show portrays the arrangement with Rachel, he CAN'T have a life...period.
I mean even assuming he's straight, he couldn't be with anyone, he couldn't remarry like Rachel because what if Grace left? That makes me so mad because of how unfair it is.
siluria: H50_Steve_Uniformsiluria on October 8th, 2011 09:26 pm (UTC)
So perfectly them! Love it!! :)